AzDude
Comment #2 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 1:44 PM
Comment #2 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 1:44 PM
a little slow starting here , so I will add this , to get it jump started �
�
Even though this Dream Girl of his was short a finger on her
left hand , a little mis-hap she had as a child while playing
with her " Suzie Home Bake Set " ,, Cusrtis still realized her
inner beauty and couldn't stop thinking about her !�
�
�Even though this Dream Girl of his was short a finger on her
left hand , a little mis-hap she had as a child while playing
with her " Suzie Home Bake Set " ,, Cusrtis still realized her
inner beauty and couldn't stop thinking about her !�
�
cplair
Comment #3 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 2:18 PM
Comment #3 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 2:18 PM
�
�I have a fly job with the Air Force. I mean where else can you go and sport the hottest jets in the world and I'm paid good money for blowing things up to hell! There's no better job for me than jets.
And there's my family who I barely see anymore, what about them? Damn, AZ, LD, PJD, JM, MySecret, Cookiejar, my new pal Philly, friggin' Chasbo now there's a buddy and then there's MaRose. Crap do I miss seeing them! I miss Ma's fresh cooked candies lots.
But now, every single time I put on my flight suit and helmet, all I can see is her! The way she smiles at me across the dinner table, the way we lock fingers when we hold hands, which by the way is how I found out that she had a digit missing and the whole Suzie Home Maker incident came out.
The way she chuckles at my corny worthless jokes, she makes me feel important and I truly just can't make up my mind about life. It's either her or jets, and I do love jets but I lo...
Wait! Bogie at 12 'o clock, activate scram jets! Ready short range sidewinders, wingman pull your head out your butt ya rookie! We have a dog fight in front of us, aw hell they've got missle lock on the rookie, pull up, I said pull the hell up dammit! Pull.............
�I have a fly job with the Air Force. I mean where else can you go and sport the hottest jets in the world and I'm paid good money for blowing things up to hell! There's no better job for me than jets.And there's my family who I barely see anymore, what about them? Damn, AZ, LD, PJD, JM, MySecret, Cookiejar, my new pal Philly, friggin' Chasbo now there's a buddy and then there's MaRose. Crap do I miss seeing them! I miss Ma's fresh cooked candies lots.
But now, every single time I put on my flight suit and helmet, all I can see is her! The way she smiles at me across the dinner table, the way we lock fingers when we hold hands, which by the way is how I found out that she had a digit missing and the whole Suzie Home Maker incident came out.
The way she chuckles at my corny worthless jokes, she makes me feel important and I truly just can't make up my mind about life. It's either her or jets, and I do love jets but I lo...
Wait! Bogie at 12 'o clock, activate scram jets! Ready short range sidewinders, wingman pull your head out your butt ya rookie! We have a dog fight in front of us, aw hell they've got missle lock on the rookie, pull up, I said pull the hell up dammit! Pull.............
AzDude
Comment #4 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 2:37 PM
Comment #4 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 2:37 PM
pull up !! ....whoa , that was close , you OK " Goose " ? , yes " Maverick "
let's go home , ah ?? ...... Delta Bravo 7 , requesting permission to land ......
request granted ....................... bring it home Maverick ...........
another day in the life and times of a fighter pillot .....
hey Goose what say we go out for a few beers tonight ? you got it
Mav ......... there on you !!......... �
�
let's go home , ah ?? ...... Delta Bravo 7 , requesting permission to land ......
request granted ....................... bring it home Maverick ...........
another day in the life and times of a fighter pillot .....
hey Goose what say we go out for a few beers tonight ? you got it
Mav ......... there on you !!......... �
�
AzDude
Comment #5 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 7:57 PM
Comment #5 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 7:57 PM
come on folks , wheres the love here with no or few comments
the story will have to end , is that what you want ? ???
the story will have to end , is that what you want ? ???
MsPooma
Comment #6 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 8:30 PM
Comment #6 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 8:30 PM
I'm thinking if you make it too military you aren't going to have much love going on and not many women are gonna add to the story since the average woman doesn't know much about that stuff.
JMO
JMO
MsPooma
Comment #7 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 8:38 PM
Comment #7 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 8:38 PM
As we walked into the smoked-filled bar, we could hear the laughter and music. People dancing and having a good time....just what we were looking for!
We wandered over to the bar and ordered our drinks (on me, of course).
We wandered over to the bar and ordered our drinks (on me, of course).
AzDude
Comment #8 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 8:47 PM
This story is about whatever you write ( post ) so feel free to change the
direction in whatever way you feel you would like it to go . Girls jump in and
mush it up all you want , guys where are you ?
Comment #8 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 8:47 PM
I'm thinking if you make it too military you aren't going to have much love going on and not many women are gonna add to the story since the average woman doesn't know much about that stuff.
This story is about whatever you write ( post ) so feel free to change the
direction in whatever way you feel you would like it to go . Girls jump in and
mush it up all you want , guys where are you ?
AzDude
Comment #9 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 8:56 PM
..........enter Curtis ........... spots the girls over at the bar and heads
in their direction - still pining over his lost love , it was , Friday night and
it was time to shake it off and have some fun with the ladies !
the bar was crowded but was-a-rockin' and the Ladies were looking fine
that night ...... Curtis was feeling fine now and the night was young ..
much could happen in the next few Hours ......
Comment #9 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 8:56 PM
As we walked into the smoked-filled bar, we could hear the laughter and music. People dancing and having a good time....just what we were looking for!
We wandered over to the bar and ordered our drinks (on me, of course).
We wandered over to the bar and ordered our drinks (on me, of course).
..........enter Curtis ........... spots the girls over at the bar and heads
in their direction - still pining over his lost love , it was , Friday night and
it was time to shake it off and have some fun with the ladies !
the bar was crowded but was-a-rockin' and the Ladies were looking fine
that night ...... Curtis was feeling fine now and the night was young ..
much could happen in the next few Hours ......
terigw
Comment #10 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 10:00 PM
Comment #10 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 10:00 PM
Would he have told Sheley and how would she react?
He feels there was a connection but she didn't stay
long enough to really find out and now he may never know
unless he can find her and.........
He feels there was a connection but she didn't stay
long enough to really find out and now he may never know
unless he can find her and.........
AzDude
Comment #11 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 10:39 PM
Comment #11 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 10:39 PM
and find her he will - this thought kept haunting as the night
grew later , yes he was having a good time and enjoying the company
of the ladies - but his " Heart " was with another and with that
he had to say good - night !...................tic tok tic tok ...
grew later , yes he was having a good time and enjoying the company
of the ladies - but his " Heart " was with another and with that
he had to say good - night !...................tic tok tic tok ...
tigerlady
Comment #12 Wednesday, April 25, 2007 1:01 AM
Comment #12 Wednesday, April 25, 2007 1:01 AM
Say fellas, it shouldn't be that hard to find a gal with a missing finger named Sheley. Why don't we google her?
�w/ tigerlady
AzDude
Comment #14 Wednesday, April 25, 2007 1:44 AM
Comment #14 Wednesday, April 25, 2007 1:44 AM
Story Ends - from lack of interest ! - sorry for those who showed
not enough people showed any interest in posting , No time for me to continue !
not enough people showed any interest in posting , No time for me to continue !
thecookiejar
Comment #15 Wednesday, April 25, 2007 7:24 AM
Comment #15 Wednesday, April 25, 2007 7:24 AM
�
�That's what I get for going on vacation....
�That's what I get for going on vacation....
terigw
Comment #16 Wednesday, April 25, 2007 9:54 AM
Comment #16 Wednesday, April 25, 2007 9:54 AM
So sad I really wanted to know how it turned out
AzDude
Comment #17 Wednesday, April 25, 2007 10:06 AM
Comment #17 Wednesday, April 25, 2007 10:06 AM
Sheley and Curtis ended up together and
were picked as the first couple to set up settlement
on planet " Mars " , although forced to live a very
different kind of lifestyle they are doing fine
and the happy couple have since produced 5 baby " Martians " ,,, ani't that sweet !
were picked as the first couple to set up settlement
on planet " Mars " , although forced to live a very
different kind of lifestyle they are doing fine
and the happy couple have since produced 5 baby " Martians " ,,, ani't that sweet !
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Comment #1 Tuesday, April 24, 2007 10:24 AM
Please continue this story in comments ,
don't be shy give it a try say anything
you like , just follow the story line to
make up the next part ...... Thanks AzDude