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Tattoo BonsaiUpdated Sep 24, 2003 by Jairo Boudewyn |
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CerebroJD
Comment #2 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 10:38 AM
Comment #2 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 10:38 AM
Umm. This is a cool wall, but it doesnt look nearly as good as your other ones. It does have potential but the edges of the plant look rough. An anti-aliasing problem maybe? And theres something funny about the pot too. It almost looks too fake. One more thing: On the left side of the screen, by the plant but below the divider, there is a lighter box that seems to be a carryover from the top section of the wall.
Just some helpful critiques that might help you improve. Good luck!
Just some helpful critiques that might help you improve. Good luck!
Jairo Boudewyn
Comment #3 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 10:44 AM
Comment #3 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 10:44 AM
Don�t Worry, Thanks for your critiques... 
treetog
Comment #5 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 12:31 PM
Comment #5 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 12:31 PM
When you began to release your work, you used to make some outstading and very detailed Object Dock icons, lately you seems more worried with quantity...
Please, dont get me wrong, this is just an opinion of somebody that respect your work and knows what you are capable to do.
Please, dont get me wrong, this is just an opinion of somebody that respect your work and knows what you are capable to do.
MGiff
Comment #6 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 1:42 PM
Comment #6 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 1:42 PM
To each his own..I for one am enjoying Jairos work.
Matchbook
Comment #7 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 2:44 PM
Comment #7 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 2:44 PM
Actually I agree with ALL viewpoints here. But to add a note: As far as any part of this wall looking fake... isn't that the idea anyhow? Why else would a "bonsai" tree have "glass" leaves? 
dalayde
Comment #8 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 3:08 PM
Comment #8 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 3:08 PM
I think his work is outstanding. How can anyone critize? Jairo, Keep up the good work. I just love all the new ideas you come up with. 
CerebroJD
Comment #9 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 4:40 PM
Comment #9 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 4:40 PM
SPGX: What I mean by fake is that the plant and the pot dont seem to integrate correctly where they meet. Maybe its just me though.
Dalayde: Keep in mind, that without critisism, how could there be improvement?
Dalayde: Keep in mind, that without critisism, how could there be improvement?
paul michaels
Comment #10 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 5:14 PM
Jairo your work is just increditable. Love it all
Comment #10 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 5:14 PM
Jairo your work is just increditable. Love it all
queezendorf
Comment #11 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 6:22 PM
Comment #11 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 6:22 PM
sorry i've been away for sometime... i 've seen some of your work and was curiose as to what program(s) you're using... somethink vector based i assume? nice cocepts by the way I've always been partial to simplicity.
I've always been partial to simplicity.
kith
Comment #13 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 10:34 PM
Comment #13 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 10:34 PM
I think a version without the plant would look fabulous.
PandaPaws
Comment #14 Thursday, September 25, 2003 12:10 AM
Comment #14 Thursday, September 25, 2003 12:10 AM
I like how you give your wallpapers that glass look but i really think this would look nice without the tattoo dude behind the bonsai.
PandaPaws
Comment #15 Thursday, September 25, 2003 12:11 AM
Comment #15 Thursday, September 25, 2003 12:11 AM
If you take requests....is there anyway to have this bonsai with a Geisha perhaps?
DentedArmour
Comment #16 Thursday, September 25, 2003 9:16 AM
Comment #16 Thursday, September 25, 2003 9:16 AM
I have been looking for oriental work and you have done a wonderfull job! although I hope you make this in 1024 res soon.Can you make a yin-yang in a salvador dali look? IE: a melting yin-yang?
DentedArmour
Comment #17 Thursday, September 25, 2003 9:16 AM
Comment #17 Thursday, September 25, 2003 9:16 AM
I have been looking for oriental work and you have done a wonderfull job! although I hope you make this in 1024 res soon.Can you make a yin-yang in a salvador dali look? IE: a melting yin-yang?
glowdarkly
Comment #18 Thursday, September 25, 2003 5:29 PM
Comment #18 Thursday, September 25, 2003 5:29 PM
My 2 cents worth: Your work is understated and quite beautiful. You have a true artists eye for the drama of simplicity. Keep on keepin on!
mossedmoon
Comment #19 Thursday, September 25, 2003 5:58 PM
Comment #19 Thursday, September 25, 2003 5:58 PM
I agree with the rough edges, although it is quite beautiful. Having bonsai as one of my many interests, perhaps a constructive comment or two? The base of the trunk should be thicker, it needs to taper and be a direct reflection of an actual tree; the leaves need the same alteration, larger towards the base and graduating smaller the closer to the apex. A setting is usually configured with the traditional triangle in mind, the bonsai being only one point... Just some thoughts, I think your work is awesome.
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Comment #1 Wednesday, September 24, 2003 10:23 AM